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必看 雅思写作常见的错误总结

更新时间:2018-05-17 16:12:48 浏览次数:76次
区域: 石家庄 > 桥西 > 中山
类别:加拿大留学
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雅思写作,是一个容易得分也容易失分的环节。那么,写作中究竟有哪些常见错误?本次环球教育就总结了写作常见的错误,看看你有没有犯过!
1不一致(disagreements)
所谓不一致不光指主谓不一致,它还包括了数的不一致、时态不一致及代词不一致等。
例1. when one have money ,he can do what he want to.
(人一旦有了钱,他就能想干什么就干什么。)
剖析:one是单数第三人称,因而本句的have应改为has;同理,want应改为wants。本句是典型的主谓不一致。
改为:once one has money ,he can do what he wants (to do).
2修饰语错位(misplaced modifiers)
英语与汉语不同,同一个修饰语置于句子不同的位置,句子的含义可能引起变化。对于这一点中国学生往往没有引起足够的重视,因而造成了不必要的误解。
例1. i believe i can do it well and i will better know the world outside the campus.
剖析:better位置不当,应置于句末。
3句子不完整(sentence fragments)
在口语中,交际双方可借助手势语气上下文等,不完整的句子完全可以被理解。可是书面语就不同了,句子结构不完整会令意思表达不清,这种情况常常发生在主句写完以后,笔者又想加些补充说明时发生。
例1. there are many ways to know the society. for example by TV, radio ,newspaper and so on.
剖析:本句后半部分"for example by TV, radio, newspaper and so on.”不是一个完整的句子,仅为一些不连贯的词语,不能独立成句。
改为:there are many ways to know society, for example, by tv, radio, and newspaper.
4悬垂修饰语(dangling modifiers)
所谓悬垂修饰语是指句首的短语与后面句子的逻辑关系混乱不清。
例如:at the age of ten, my grandfather died. 这句中"at the age of ten"只点出十岁时,但没有说明“谁”十岁时。按一般推理不可能是my grandfather,如果我们把这个悬垂修饰语改明确一点,全句就不那么费解了。
改为:when i was ten, my grandfather died.
例1. to do well in college, good grades are essential.剖析:句中不定式短语 “to do well in college” 的逻辑主语不清楚。
改为:to do well in college, a student needs good grades.
5词性误用(misuse of parts of speech)
“词性误用”常表现为:介词当动词用;形容词当副词用;名词当动词用等。
例1. none can negative the importance of money.
剖析:negative 系形容词,误作动词。
改为:none can deny the importance of money.
6指代不清(ambiguous reference of pronouns)
指代不清主要讲的是代词与被指代的人或物关系不清,或者先后所用的代词不一致。试看下面这一句:
mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted her to be her bridesmaid.
(玛丽和我姐姐很要好,因为她要她做她的伴娘。)
读完上面这一句话,读者无法明确地判断两位姑娘中谁将结婚,谁将当伴娘。如果我们把易于引起误解的代词的所指对象加以明确,意思就一目了然了。这个句子可改为:mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted my
sister to be her bridesmaid.
例1. and we can also know the society by serving it yourself.
剖析:句中人称代词we和反身代词yourself指代不一致。改为:we can also know society by serving it
ourselves.
7不间断句子(run-on sentences)
什么叫run-on sentence?请看下面的例句。
例1. there are many ways we get to know the outside world.剖析:这个句子包含了两层完整的意思:“there are many ways.” 以及“we get to know the outside world.”。简单地把它们连在一起就不妥当了。
改为:there are many ways for us to learn about the outside world.
或:there are many ways through which we can become acquainted with the outside world.
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